在雅思寫作中，你是否陷入過 “背模板、堆高級(jí)詞卻難上 6 分” 的困境？前雅思考官 Simon 的雅思寫作邏輯告訴你：7 分的核心不是辭藻堆砌，而是 “考官思維” 的精準(zhǔn)匹配。

Simon 寫作邏輯的 3 大黃金法則

任務(wù)回應(yīng)：緊扣 “題目關(guān)鍵詞”

Simon 在批注中反復(fù)強(qiáng)調(diào)：“每句話必須回答‘How/Why’”。
以《科技對(duì)教育的影響》為例：

普通考生

Technology is important for education.（假大空）

Simon 邏輯
Technology specifically improves education by enabling personalized learning, as online platforms can analyze students' weak points and provide tailored exercises.（緊扣 “如何影響”，加入具體方式）

批注案例
 

在《政府是否該支持藝術(shù)》的作文中，Simon 批注：
? 低分問題：“You mentioned 'art is necessary' but didn't explain why governments, not individuals, should fund it.”
? 修正邏輯：“Governments have a broader responsibility to preserve cultural heritage, which art represents, unlike private donors who may focus on short-term profits.”

用 “隱性邏輯” 替代 “模板連接詞”

Simon 反對(duì)濫用 “Firstly, Secondly”，而是通過語義遞進(jìn)構(gòu)建邏輯網(wǎng)：
段落間：前一段結(jié)尾 “科技提高效率”，下一段開頭用 “However, this efficiency comes with a cost to human interaction” 形成轉(zhuǎn)折銜接。

句子內(nèi)：使用 “this/these” 指代前文（如 “These policies can effectively reduce pollution” 中的 “These” 呼應(yīng)上段提到的具體政策）。

批注技巧
 

“觀點(diǎn) + 解釋 + 例證” 三層遞進(jìn)法

Simon 的 “三明治論證法” 讓觀點(diǎn)立得?。?br />觀點(diǎn)句

Social media weakens real-life relationships.

解釋句

Because it encourages superficial interactions, like liking posts without meaningful communication.

例證句：A 2023 study by Oxford University found that people relying heavily on social media have 30% fewer deep conversations with friends.

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