
在第五檔作文中,英語(yǔ)書面表達(dá)提到:語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面存在有一些錯(cuò)誤,但是由于盡量使用更復(fù)雜的結(jié)構(gòu)或者更高級(jí)更先進(jìn)的詞匯。換句話說,如果考生使用高級(jí)詞匯或句型,即使犯了少量或輕微的語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤,也可不扣分,文章還是屬于最高檔次。因此,為了讓文章檔次高,首先要學(xué)會(huì)使用高級(jí)詞匯。高級(jí)詞匯的使用能夠給文章增添色彩和畫面感。它會(huì)大大提升文章的檔次,從而幫助考生獲得高分。要做到準(zhǔn)確使用英語(yǔ)高級(jí)詞匯,應(yīng)該注意以下幾個(gè)方面:
一、使用亮點(diǎn)詞匯的4種方法1.標(biāo)新立異 “語(yǔ)”眾不同在寫作時(shí),恰當(dāng)?shù)厥褂靡恍﹦e人可能想不到的詞匯或表達(dá),會(huì)體現(xiàn)出自己的高水平。(1) He will also spend some time in staying with me and share many funny things with me about his work.→He will also spare some time to accompany me and share many funny things with me about his work. (2020·全國(guó)卷Ⅰ書面表達(dá))(2)I like the school uniform betterthan the traditional Chinese dress at the welcome ceremony next month.→I prefer the school uniform to the traditional Chinese dress at the welcomeceremony next month.(2019·江蘇高考書面表達(dá))(3)Whenever I meet difficulties, you always cheer me up and help me out.→Whenever I encounter difficulties, you always cheerme up and help me out.(2019·浙江高考書面表達(dá))(4) Great changes have taken place in our school in the lastfew years. And the news came that a shortfilm will be shown in our school.→Our school has witnessed great changes in the lastfew years. And word came that a shortfilm will be shown in our school. (2018·全國(guó)卷Ⅱ書面表達(dá))(5)I’m busy with my lessons now, for the College Entrance Examination, whichis very important to me, is near.→I’m occupied with my lessons now, for the College Entrance Examination,which is of great importance to me,is around the corner. (天津高考書面表達(dá))
2.多樣表達(dá) 避免重復(fù)在寫作時(shí),應(yīng)盡量避免重復(fù)使用相同的單詞或短語(yǔ),要盡量用貼切多樣的詞語(yǔ)來展示自己的水平。用詞不同、表達(dá)方式迥異,也是高級(jí)用法。(1)There are different kinds of fruittrees as well as many animals.→There are different kindsof fruit trees as well as a variety ofanimals. (2020·全國(guó)卷Ⅱ書面表達(dá))(2)Then there will be different fantastic performances playedby talented students.→Then there will be various fantastic performances played bytalented students. (2019·全國(guó)卷Ⅲ書面表達(dá))(3)Moreover, we will build a new stadiumand with the stadium built, a wide rangeof sports events are able to be held.→Moreover,we will build a new stadium and withthe stadium set up, a wide range of sportsevents are able to be held. (2018·全國(guó)卷Ⅲ書面表達(dá))
3.短語(yǔ)優(yōu)先 語(yǔ)言生動(dòng)當(dāng)單詞和短語(yǔ)表示同一個(gè)意思時(shí),優(yōu)先使用短語(yǔ)。恰當(dāng)使用短語(yǔ),一方面能使文章更加生動(dòng),另一方面也能展示出學(xué)生扎實(shí)的語(yǔ)言功底。(1)If it is convenient, may I visit you at your office next Tuesday togive you more details?→If it is convenient, mayI pay you a visit at your office next Tuesday to give you more details? (2020·全國(guó)卷Ⅲ書面表達(dá))(2)The match will be held in our school gym on the afternoonof July 4th.→Thematch will take place in our school gymon the afternoon of July 4th. (2019·全國(guó)卷Ⅱ書面表達(dá))(3)Hopefully,these suggestions would be helpful/beneficial to you.→Hopefully, these suggestionswould be of great help/benefit to you. (2018·全國(guó)卷Ⅰ書面表達(dá))(4)To learn more about the development of our school, all the studentsare welcome to watch the short film Growing Together.→Withthe aim of learningmore about the development of our school, all the students are welcome to watchthe short film Growing Together. (2018·全國(guó)卷Ⅱ書面表達(dá))
4.高級(jí)詞匯 凸顯水平為了表現(xiàn)自己的語(yǔ)言功底,顯示出自己的寫作水平,應(yīng)避免反復(fù)使用低年級(jí)學(xué)過的簡(jiǎn)單詞匯,盡量使用高中階段學(xué)到的詞匯來代替。(1)The peaches were ripe and soft andI want to take a bite.→The peaches were ripe andsoft and I couldn’t wait to take a bite.(2020·全國(guó)卷Ⅱ書面表達(dá))(2)You are definitely welcome to join in the festival, which will give color and fun to our festival.→ You are definitely welcometo show up on stage, which will add color and fun to our festival. (2019·全國(guó)卷Ⅲ書面表達(dá))(3) If you take my advice you are sureto have the most unforgettable experience during your college in Beijing.→Solong asyou take my advice you are bound to havethe most unforgettable experience during your college in Beijing. (2018·北京高考書面表達(dá)第一節(jié))
二、使用亮點(diǎn)詞匯的2點(diǎn)注意
1.注意增加亮詞的“出鏡率”,變消極詞匯為積極詞匯閱讀中能認(rèn)識(shí)但寫作中不會(huì)用的詞匯屬于消極詞匯,寫作中能運(yùn)用自如的詞匯為積極詞匯,也就是平常所說的“第一反應(yīng)詞”。積極詞匯量的多少直接決定著英語(yǔ)作文表達(dá)水平的高低?,F(xiàn)在很多考生的困難是,頭腦中的很多詞匯介于積極詞匯與消極詞匯之間;另外,很多背過的消極詞匯如果較長(zhǎng)時(shí)間不接觸就會(huì)變成陌生詞匯。因此在備考過程中,考生要做的事情就是迅速擴(kuò)大消極詞匯量并且保持接觸的頻度,力爭(zhēng)使其變成積極詞匯。
很多考生作文駐足不前的一個(gè)重要原因是反復(fù)使用初中學(xué)過的簡(jiǎn)單詞匯,背了大量的亮詞妙語(yǔ)而不用。建議大家在想到一個(gè)表達(dá)時(shí),務(wù)必要想一想還有沒有更好的表達(dá)方式,這就是我們平時(shí)常講的“頭腦風(fēng)暴法”。例如想表達(dá)“美麗的”這個(gè)含義,大家首先想到的是“beautiful”,那么在下筆時(shí),要想一想還有沒有更出彩的表達(dá),如“attractive”或“charming”等。再如表達(dá)“困難的”時(shí),大家常用“difficult”,那是不是用“tough”或“challenging”更與眾不同呢?
2.注意亮點(diǎn)詞匯使用的場(chǎng)合寫作時(shí),在用詞上不可隨心所欲,決不能為追求“高級(jí)”而使用復(fù)雜但毫無把握的詞語(yǔ),也不能滿篇堆積所謂的“高級(jí)”詞匯,否則給人過分炫耀之嫌,得不償失。一般來說,一篇文章能用好三至五個(gè)高級(jí)詞匯就可以了。另外,為能更好地“完成規(guī)定的寫作任務(wù)”,減少錯(cuò)誤,特別提醒考生在使用“高級(jí)詞匯”時(shí),一定要注意遵循“準(zhǔn)確、恰當(dāng)”的原則,并且要注意使用的場(chǎng)合,難詞和生僻詞匯并不一定就是高級(jí)詞匯,例如:一大早我們買了一些圣誕禮物。Early in the morning we purchased some Christmas presents.(purchased太過于書面化,改為bought更地道)
三、寫作的秘密武器——24個(gè)高級(jí)詞匯
名詞 |
普通詞匯 |
高級(jí)詞匯 |
普通詞匯 |
高級(jí)詞匯 |
chance |
opportunity |
choice |
alternative |
idea |
opinion |
people |
individual |
result |
consequence |
effect |
influence |
動(dòng)詞 |
have |
posses |
replace |
substitute |
bear |
put up with |
understand |
make sense of |
develop |
promote |
consider |
take intoaccount |
形容詞 |
enough |
adequate |
rich |
abundant |
proper |
appropriate |
important |
vital/significant |
interesting |
absorbing/appealing |
difficult |
challenging |
副詞 |
finally |
eventually |
hardly |
barely |
immediately |
in a flash |
nowadays |
currently |
連詞 |
so |
therefore |
and |
as well as |
(1)It is of importance for you to understand the content, Tang poetry.→It is of importance for youto make sense of the content ,Tang poetry.→It is of importance for youto be aware of the content,Tang poetry.
(2) That’s why I think the trip alongthe Yangtze River will be a better choice.→That’s why I think the tripalong the Yangtze River will be a better alternative.
(3) In the coming three years, our schoollife will be difficult.→In the coming three years,our school life will be challenging.
四、寫作的頂級(jí)裝備——27個(gè)加分詞匯
表達(dá)關(guān)注的名詞 |
attention,focus,concern |
表達(dá)爭(zhēng)論的名詞 |
discussion, debate, argument |
表達(dá)現(xiàn)象的名詞 |
phenomenon |
表達(dá)優(yōu)缺點(diǎn)的名詞 |
advantage, disadvantage,strength,weakness |
表達(dá)增長(zhǎng)或下降的動(dòng)詞 |
increase,accumulate,decrease,decline |
表達(dá)導(dǎo)致后果的動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ) |
result in,lead to, bring about, contribute to, give rise to |
表達(dá)支持、反對(duì)的動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ) |
approve of, be in favor of, object to |
表達(dá)可能性的形容詞 |
likely |
表達(dá)有好處的形容詞 |
beneficial |
表達(dá)強(qiáng)調(diào)的副詞 |
particularly, especially |
(1)The picture shows a common phenomenon these days.這幅圖顯示了這些日子的一個(gè)常見現(xiàn)象。(2)The Internet has brought about many changes in the workplace.網(wǎng)絡(luò)給工作場(chǎng)所帶來了很多變化。(3)Our teacher is likely to get angry when she sees the dirtyfloor.我們的老師看到地面這么臟時(shí),可能會(huì)發(fā)火。
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